Introduction to Literature II Paper: guidelines and suggested topics

       The following are some guidelines for your papers, with some suggested subjects.  These are only suggestions, and you should feel free to choose your own topic to write on (however, you must choose a work on the syllabus).  Your paper should be a critical analysis that reflects your own point of view, argued by a specific thesis that is demonstrated in a focused, narrowly defined approach.  A subject is only a beginning; you must then concentrate on finding a topic (your idea considerably narrowed down).  For instance, the mechanical versus the natural in "Odor of Chrysanthemums" is a subject, while a more specific topic might be [I intend to argue that] the tone of the opening paragraphs of Lawrence’s story metaphorically describes how industrialism corrupts humanity as well as nature, because all of the comparisons between people and "things" are negatively described.

      To help narrow down your idea, concentrate on one scene or one event within a scene, or compare two scenes, two characters, or several events within a story, or one act or one section of a play--don't write on the entire play/story or everything a character does.  You may also wish to explicate a poem or compare two poems. 

     

       You may want to check with me on your topic idea: write down your thesis -- if it helps, phrase your sentence, "I intend to argue that ______, because _____."  That way I have something specific to help you with.  (Note that the "because" of the above sentence adds the specific to your argument and keeps you from being too general or vague in your thesis.)

       A word on citing quotations: poetry or prose that is more than four lines should be set off from the text (indent 10 spaces from the left margin), as in this passage from "Odor of Chrysanthemums":

 

The trucks thumped heavily past, one by one, with slow inevitable movement, as she stood insignificantly trapped between the jolting black wagons and the hedge; then they curved away towards the coppice where the withered oak leaves dropped noiselessly, while the birds, pulling at the scarlet hips beside the track, made off into the dusk that had already crept into the spinney.                                                             (1728)

 

       But keep large passages at a minimum and don't cite more than is germane to your discussion.  Quotations should follow a developed argument as an illustration--they illustrate (argue) something that you have already established.  Quotations that are set off from the text are by definition quotes, so they are not placed in quotation marks.  Note too that the page, or Act, scene, and line numbers, come after the period (skip two spaces).  If you use anything other than the Norton Anthology of World Masterpieces, cite in a note the edition of the play, short story, or novel from which you take the quotation—use only one edition throughout the paper.  The above quotation from "Chrysanthemums" is an example: as an endnote I might write, "This and all subsequent quotations are taken from D. H. Lawrence: The Complete Short Stories, vol. 2.  Or, I could merely add it parenthetically after my first quote: (283; D. H. Lawrence: The Complete Short Stories, vol. 2).

      f you cite three lines or less, make the citation part of the sentence, as in the following: The tone of story is illustrated when, in the opening paragraphs, Lawrence describes a scene where "the trucks thumped heavily past, one by one, with slow inevitable movement, as she stood insignificantly trapped between the jolting black wagons and the hedge" (1728).

       Or consider this piece of poetry from T. S. Eliot's "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock": Eliot begins his poem with a startling image that compares the calm of the night to a person undergoing surgery: "Let us go then, you and I, / When the evening is spread out against the sky / Like a patient etherised upon a table" (ll. 1-3).

       Note here that the / mark indicates where the poetry line ends in your text.  The quotation should fit your sentence: that means that while you quote the words exactly, the punctuation at the end of your sentence depends on whether the idea is a complete sentence (this line ends with a semicolon, but the sentence is a complete idea in itself.  Also note that when you give a quote within a sentence, the parenthetical citation is part of your sentence; thus the period (or semicolon or colon) comes after the parenthesis while all other punctuation comes before.

       Be faithful to the edition of the text you are using when citing; break poetry according to the editors' decisions, and write dialogue or description as the author gives it.  When quoting from one of our texts or a secondary source, your guide should be the MLA Manual of Style, 1985 (or later) edition, located in the reference section of the library, PR 3521.

      A last reminder: type your paper, 3 to 5 pages—no more than 5.  Please do not put your paper in a folder or add a cover sheet.  Put your name, class section, and date in the upper right hand corner of the first page; put your last name and page number on all subsequent pages; give your paper a specific title, centered on your first page, that reflects your thesis idea; use a paper clip or staple your pages.  Handwritten or late papers will not be accepted.  For the first paper, indicate (a written statement in pencil on the first page is sufficient) whether you want a grade or not.  After I have marked your paper, I will put a grade on it in order to let you know how the work compares with what an average sophomore-level paper should be.  If you request a grade, I will enter it in my grade book; if you do not want the paper graded, you will still have some idea as what improvements you need to make or how you stand in relation to other students' work.  The second paper will be entered as a course grade for everyone.

        Be Specific.  Proofread your paper carefully, but do more than merely reread it: revise your work.  Revision is a major part of writing; one of the easiest problems to spot in reading student papers is the lack of revision, which usually indicates haste, laziness, or indifference.  Writing is a skill that takes effort, patience, and the willingness to improve it, so start early. 

 

 

         Some suggested writing subjects:

         “ The Metamorphosis”:

         The family as destructive entity

        Gregor as metaphor

        The tone of the story, narrator's voice, and/or readers'expectations

        Indications of guilt: its manifestations and meaning

        Unreality and objectivity

        Odor of Chrysanthemums":

        The relationship between husband and wife

        The tone of the story: autumn, death

        The metaphors of darkness and fire

        The close attention to details in the story

        Isolation: how is it suggested in the story, and why?  What does it mean?

        "Spotted Horses":

        Description and its contribution to characterization

        Male foolishness vs. Female stability

        The story as tragedy

        Differences in characterization and their purposes in the story

        "Young Goodman Brown":

        Deception and religious belief

        A comparison with Kafka's Metamorphosis: the "aloneness" of the individual

        How important is reality to the story?  Does it matter what is real?

        A psychological reading of the events (authority, sexual temptation, etc.)

        Names, symbols, religious allusions

        "My Kinsman, Major Molineaux":

        Robin's naivety vs. his "shrewdness"

        The purpose of the "initiation"

        How good and pure is Robin?

        The changing view from the narrator's perspective

        The sense of dream and nightmare in the story

        "Flowering Judas":

        Atmosphere, setting, dramatization

        Romanticism/anti-romanticism

        The importance of imagery

        The significance of the dream

        Christian symbolism and its importance

        "The Guest":

        The importance of description in describing isolation

        Characterization and its thematic purpose in the story

        Moral duty and its implications

        The question of heroism

        “Death Constant Beyond Love”:

        Thematic importance in the title

        The idea of solitude: its effect, purpose, meaning

        Symbolism in the story

        Nature and death: how are they linked? why important?

        Illusion and beauty: how are they linked? why important?

        Hedda Gabler:

        The question of tragedy

        The stage as image--symbolism

        Stage contrasts/character contrasts

        The complexities of Hedda: good or bad?

        Creativity and passion vs. logic/reason

        The roles of heredity and environment

        Anti-Romanticism

        Endgame:

        The significance of the stage setting--symbolism

        The significance of the title

        The relationship of Hamm and Clov

        The play as metaphor

        The play as meaningful/meaningless

        Mother Courage:

        The purpose and uses of Brecht's "alienation effect"

        Religious irony and its uses

        Capitalism as evil

        Mother Courage as "anti-heroic"

        The lack of characterization: why is that effective in this play?

        Poetry:

        Analyze a poem with regard to its symbolism, thematic interest, or imagery

        Explicate one of the poems we have read

        Explain the persona and its relevance for appreciating a particular poem

        Effective strategies or rhetorical devices

        Masters' use of carpe diem: its thematic importance

        Humor or satire in Masters' poems

        Small-town revolt in Masters

        Realism and horror in the W.W.I poets

        The importance of Blake's "simplicity"

        The feeling of the modern in Eliot

        Imagery, symbolism, or theme in "Prufrock"

 

 

 

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